[identity profile] veleda-k.livejournal.com2011-11-27 08:31 am
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Talking Through an Empty Skull by Dragonfly

Title: Talking Through an Empty Skull
Author: Dragonfly (Mojave Dragonfly)
Spoilers: "Point Blank"
Characters: Neal, Peter, Diana
Pairings: Gen
Warning: None
Summary: After "Point Blank" Neal and Peter have a talk.
Why rec'd? This is an intensely satisfying coda to "Point Blank," delivering all the emotional resolution that was missing from the episode itself. The interplay between Neal and Peter is tense and very well done.


Mods, could we please get a tag for "episode:2x09," please?
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[identity profile] mrwubbles.livejournal.com2011-10-11 09:49 am
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Working Lunch by Mojave Dragonfly (outside link)

Title:Working Lunch (note: link is to FF.net, not LJ)
Author: Mojave Dragonfly
Spoilers: none
Characters: Lauren, Neal, Peter, Ruiz
Pairings: (if appropriate) none, gen
Warning: none
Summary: Don't you hate it when someone steals your lunch from the break room refrigerator? So does Agent Ruiz.
Why rec'd? The writer brilliantly uses the rare POV of Lauren Cruz here to give us a glimpse of Peter and Neal's dynamic. Not particularly sympathetic in the show itself, she stays in character in the fic yet still steers us towards a great moment of comfort towards the end. The writer utilizes an interesting flashback back, flash forward storytelling that keeps the reader interested all the way through.
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